tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1233560905315325468.post886307551190908364..comments2022-04-10T00:39:11.225+08:00Comments on 汪汪若千頃陂: 【詩歌】曉光林日清http://www.blogger.com/profile/09727608260267324037noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1233560905315325468.post-82108130522259879572011-11-26T21:00:47.877+08:002011-11-26T21:00:47.877+08:00此前我沒注意到「首句平聲結尾入韻、仄聲結尾不入韻」的規則,致《曉光》、《逸民》有不協韻的情形,以後習...此前我沒注意到「首句平聲結尾入韻、仄聲結尾不入韻」的規則,致《曉光》、《逸民》有不協韻的情形,以後習作時會改進。抱歉竟在八個月後才發現有留言,感謝指教。林日清https://www.blogger.com/profile/09727608260267324037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1233560905315325468.post-26606943824895198462011-03-23T14:00:59.440+08:002011-03-23T14:00:59.440+08:00首句若以平聲結尾即意「入韻」,心乃下平十二侵,不協下平七陽韻,宜易之,或首句轉為「平平仄仄平平仄」首句若以平聲結尾即意「入韻」,心乃下平十二侵,不協下平七陽韻,宜易之,或首句轉為「平平仄仄平平仄」Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15893504642973898867noreply@blogger.com